Every good book has…
A strong opening
Satisfying, fitting style
Powerful description
Balanced showing and telling
Diverse and developed characters
Effective dialogue
Strong internal story logic
A good balance of tension and release
A sense of originality
A satisfying conclusion
This one does not.
Satyr & Nymph
an erotic story
a collection of photographs and first-person account of the bizarre event involving the three participants:
The Old Man
The Young Woman
The Artist
18+